Being a Punjabi Lover I have always desired to write in Punjabi, and this love has finally showered on 11 May 2009 wid this little piece from my Heart; Therefore presenting it to you in its original mood.
-Navjinder
ਇਹ ਪਲ ਹਰਪਲ ਵਾਂਗ ਗੁਜ਼ਰ ਜਾਣਾ
ਇਹ ਪਲ ਅਗਲੇ-ਪਲ ਨਿਗਲ ਜਾਣਾ
ਇਹ ਪਲ ਕਿਸੇ-ਹੋਰ-ਪਲ ਨਈਂ ਆਓਣਾ
ਇਹ ਪਲ ਭਲਕੇ ਬਹੁਤ ਯਾਦ ਆੳਣਾ
eh pal har pal wang guzar jana hai
eh pal agley pal Nigal jana hai
eh pal kissey hor pal nahi aauNa hai
eh pal bhalkey bahut yaad aauna hai
Great start bro!!! keep it up.
This moment, eh pal, lovely interpretation.
Add few more lines and complete the poem. The paragraph itself a collection of emotions, spontaneous flow of emotions.
A lil novice effort, extension to ur work:
eh pal intezaar guzre kal da
eh pal judeya jazbaat dil da
eh pal jis ch vicchereya pyaar mil da
eh pal jis ch saar saare jag da
Thanks Anurag!! Yes, could be more elaborative but I just want it to be short...
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